Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Week of 12/1/11

Hey, December is here! Alright, so first off, I think the idea for class newspapers is an interesting and fun new assignment. I can't quite put my finger on it as to why, but it just is. For this week's reading, I found it went by a lot smoother, and I have to take less notes. I like how the two halves of the story have met in a way now, but are still in separate locations. The only major beef I have with it is the lack of transition from setting to setting. That is it for this week I guess, peace off!
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  1. MelanieDecember 6, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    I've heard others say they like that the story is reaching a conclusion as well. I'm glad you've enjoyed it!
    I'm not sure I noticed the lack of transition... could you perhaps give an example?

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  2. JustinGrealDecember 6, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    What I mean is how at some points it seems to just go to the other setting, without a pause or signal of any sort. It just changes conversations and characters.

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